I submitted a piece of writing for the first time today on the E-Anthology. I submitted the poem written below and asked for the users to ADDRESS. We will see what response I get! I am excited to receive feedback from others and for some reason I am not scared or nervous about what they will say!
Who's garden is it?
Mine I say.
I have the control,
things must go my way!
Not so said the child,
I too have a say.
Things are not always
going to go your way.
Impossible I mumble.
This is my classroom.
If this isn't my garden
I surely am doomed.
Not so said the child,
This is our classroom.
A garden in which we grow
or else we are doomed.
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